tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4306995308064708419.post2186109166282090574..comments2023-06-08T06:59:21.033-07:00Comments on A Whale on a Cliff: Fairytale Adaptation: Snow WhiteCharli Hohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02209541270234526690noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4306995308064708419.post-88427931741272533802009-09-09T11:51:11.994-07:002009-09-09T11:51:11.994-07:00Hey there! We read your comic in class. We analyze...Hey there! We read your comic in class. We analyzed it according to the story wheel, and decided that it doesn't quite follow the format (but it works anyway). As we interpreted it, it had the first five parts, plus a sort of "Return", but didn't have a "Take" or "Change."<br /><br />We didn't feel that this took away from the story because the conclusion was still satisfying, if depressing. <br /><br />Very interesting interpretation :)Lindseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11098873667714904864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4306995308064708419.post-53022429841390980972009-09-09T11:49:25.074-07:002009-09-09T11:49:25.074-07:00I'm interested in how you switched the traits ...I'm interested in how you switched the traits of the characters. The queen takes on the role of Snow White, I wonder if you could have used the part of the story where the queen wants Snow's heart and the hunt's man gives her a deer or pig heart. I'm glad to see the comb being used too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4306995308064708419.post-8478788560030811102009-09-09T11:48:53.968-07:002009-09-09T11:48:53.968-07:00Nice comic, really good adaptation. As far as Reed...Nice comic, really good adaptation. As far as Reed and I are concerned, all eight parts are functioning and present. <br /><br />I like the simplicity of the number of pages and panels, along with minimum dialogue. I think showing us more than telling us what is happening sets up a more creepy and a tense mood.RNShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17336983851645469013noreply@blogger.com